Jason: Deep. Very deep. I like how this can be interpreted into many different things. Similar to the human mind, this passage was simple, yet on a deeper level it was thought-provoking and deceptively complex. Despite some confusing grammatical errors, it is a wonderful good start to a SoC paragraph. Keep up the good work!
(Also, I think it would be better if you just wrote the thing on here directly).
Jason: Deep. Very deep. I like how this can be interpreted into many different things. Similar to the human mind, this passage was simple, yet on a deeper level it was thought-provoking and deceptively complex. Despite some confusing grammatical errors, it is a wonderful good start to a SoC paragraph. Keep up the good work!
(Also, I think it would be better if you just wrote the thing on here directly).